Gimmick's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Object Swarm Tutorial]

It's nice, but....

It's nice, but let me tell you one thing: You have to give the source FLA in case someone doesn't understand or doesn't want to do it himself. There's another thing, but........you have to guess it yourself :P

Eirun responds:

You can copy all fundamental code segments from the flash and paste them into your script. That should be enough. Making things yourself is practice. :)

I don't really have the freetime to guess around, though. But it does bug me! :D

[Missile Man 2]

"Wow you are so sooo cool man....."

It truly deserved this 5/5 and 10/10 from me! The intro was nice, holstering a man with a radio and a rocket, the game was nice, but I found a few glitches.... :(| When you double - clicked the mouse when the game was over, I saw my score was really 206, then it said, "your score: 206" then I clicked the mouse and it said for a second: "your score: 0" and went back to the game screen. I liked how you drew those birds and obstacles and stuff. Jeez, was it hard! Those GODDAMN birds and especially that STUPID jumping man! I felt as if I could make the missile move into him right then! Anyway, enough of that. Here are a few things to work on:

The smoke - If you try and try but the smoke disappears in a flash because of _alpha, then remove the smoke. It might also block the view of the person's cursor, but that's what it's supp-hosed to do, ha ha!

The man you control - If you try and just make the man move using the arrow keys using the if(Key.isDown(Key.RIGHT){ or if(Key.isDown(Key.LEFT){ then it might - no, not might, WILL get a higher rating - I guarantee.

Lolz that jumping man...............
Might be good enough for a platform game like the guy below me says.....if you just work on the parts I told you about.

If this advice helps you build the full version of this game, then don't forget to credit me! No, not the NG API, I hate that thing.
[Sanjeev98]
P.S PM me.

14StoryDesign responds:

Thanks Sanjeev! I am enjoying getting the feedback. I have been making small Flash things for years but most of it has stayed unseen.

I will work on getting the smoke working better. The response I get is that people like the smoke, it just slows down the flash interpreter. So I am going to try and reduce the frequency and then I can sustain it longer.

[Pixel Draw]

Well, it is nice but............

Well, it is a nice game, but so far as I am concerned, if you could add a submit button to submit your creation, it would be a bit better. But, please, do you know how to create a submit button? I'm doing one for my new flash game - Jetpack Man v1.0 - the demo, which, if passes judgement and everybody likes it, i will make the full 50-level game. So, how do you add a submit your score, or submit button?

NecroLordOfChaos responds:

I do not know how to make a submit button, sadly.
so if you ever learn how, please pm me and i'll add it to the game :D

Thank you for reviewing!

[Freedom - Person Lost]

i love it

Like in Colour my heart, I'm fond of the animations and I love the conclusion. My favourite are the friendly light bubbles (:D), but the dark part is ... I don't know, maybe the most touching at all. I thought: 'I will find the guy and then discover what can I interact with', but when I found him and saw 'Help me' I simply couldn't leave him in the dark again and clicked immediatly. The feeling was astonishing. It was something I had to tell. Thank You!
This game was beautiful ;))))))

SilverStitch responds:

Im really glad you enojied this and that you were so moved by it.
Thanks. =)
[Crtl+C, Crtl+V] xD

[Emotches - my first flash]

"I love it for a first flash!"

just great for a first flash ^^

the graphics = ok
the idea = just great ^^

and that it what is important ^^
make more of these games.
with u'r own ideas.

i'm u'r fan allready :D

keep up the good work man^^
But try to make a difficulty level, so that : Easy : Thousands of :You-know-what's came and you almost won the game, : Medium : Some bad, some good come, : Impossible : No goods whatsoever.

Ducksink responds:

Dejavoo 0.o thanks anyway.

[Missile Man]

"I like it"

The concept of this game is nice, and here's the bad news:
The more you hold on and the more smoke that comes, the more pressure it puts on my operating system, not just yours, it could be millions of people's systems that could go slow because of this. This is the most crucial problem. Fix that problem and the rating will go higher.
Here's some more bugs: The smoke. When you restart, the smoke still stays there. If you are using the "_root.createEmptyMovieClip("MovieCli p.name", "depth"); and that's on the second frame, where the first frame is the start button, add this code to the FRAME of the first frame:

TheMovieClpName.clear();
where TheMovieClipName is the name of the movieclip that is the smoke.
Fix the smoke problem and the rating will be around 3.4/5.00.

Put a background, possibly some music, and the rating will shoot higher up to let's see.... around 4.00 - 4.50.
Likewise, it's fine with me for now. I'll definitely add this to my favorites.
Oh, and, by the way, this goes in the "Games" category and the genre "Gadgets - Other" section.
P.S if this review helps you to improve the game don't forget to add my name to the credits!

[Sanjeev, Username sanjeev98]

14StoryDesign responds:

Well, I got a few of those things worked on. Thanks!

[Bowlec 3D]

Wow!!!!

This game concept is soooooo nice, I like ten-pin bowling, and i like it for the fact it's in 3-D! How'd you do this, man? This game is AWESOME!! I like the way you can change the cameras, how'd you do THAT!!!?? Plus for the fact it's in 3-D, the ball modeling is nice (although I know it's just a sphere in swift 3D) , the pins are very nice, and the bowling alley and the cameras are the center of attraction. And finally, for the counter, it's nice, and unlike what you said, that it will go wrong, it never did. No! It never went wrong! Can you believe that! I absolutely LOVE IT!!!!!! If I were to give it a rating out of 10, I'd definitely give 10/10, and, as for the out of 5 rating system, I'd definitely give it 5/5. No, I am serious! This game truly deserves a 5/5 and 10/10! 1/5 for the cameras, 3/5 for the modeling and for the fact it's in 3-D, and 1/5 for the game concept and everything else. As for the out of 10 system, I'd give 2/10 for the cameras, 6/10 for the modeling and for the fact it's in 3-D, and 2/10 for the concept and everything else.

I hereby give you this rating:
10/10, 5/5.
And my remark:
This game ROCKS!!!!!!! I'll definitely add it to my favorites.

shajby responds:

thanks for positive and very descriptive feedback!:-) Its done in PV3D and i have tried to used new physics engine called JigLib!

[The Icky Bug Machine]

Lol

Nasty. Homo lol

mgetty responds:

Thanks for the review. I'm glad you liked it--I think.

[Virtual Pet]

Cool Game!!!

Very addicting game, but the happiness goes down no matter whe\at you do. But it's nice for a first flash ;)

klmai responds:

thankz1!!

[Luffy/Naruto BETA V:0.0.1]

Nice game`

cool game`

FLAnimator responds:

Awww, best comment ever lol! Thanks!