Quicksmasher 2011-08-09 11:20:51

Put me off your list motherfucka

Quicksmasher 2011-08-09 11:26:41

Entertaining story btw.

Your teacher should start teaching "counting" if he likes numbers so much, btw. I disliked his comments.

I don't know from where you got the system from, but I read out you didn't think of it by yourself. At the beginning, you described your surroundings pretty interesting, and after that, the reader got the system and the process of your doom in his face.

Aka, I think adverbs for your actions and adjectives for your feelings would do the trick, if you kept it longer.

Still nice work.

Quicksmasher 2011-08-09 16:19:42

I didn't read anything from your newspost but the story and the title of your list.

>:C

Quicksmasher 2011-08-09 16:20:00

Put me on your list again, btw :3

ChiralAnomaly 2011-08-10 08:19:43

if i were to write a story about time running out, i would write 500 words about a guy who had trouble finding the toilet when he was 'urgent', and describe how he overcame the obstacles while nobody seemed to give a fuck.

Quicksmasher 2011-08-10 09:54:54

Ok.

Put me on your list, again.

So that there are 2 Kwiksmasherz.

:3

Quicksmasher 2011-08-10 14:22:11

Lol.

Asandir changed you, Sanjeev.

Expectrum 2011-08-11 08:02:05

Nice story! Have you thought about posting in the Writing Forum? You could get some pretty good feedback over there.

Anyway, I thought it was funny that you attached that picture to your newspost, because it's the exact same one I used to make TropicalParadise's profile banner some years ago :D

<a href="http://tropicalparadise.newgrounds.com/">http://tropicalparadise.newgrounds.co m/</a>

Quicksmasher 2011-08-11 11:18:18

Asandir's Quality is better.

You know why? Because of the Community. Judging practically effective, Asandir's easy to understand and always kind sort posts are something everybody likes.

You might have the better theory than him, but less users like to read your crap than Asandir's.

I personally like your stuff more than his, though. But Asandir is still our conversation king.

Btw, I'm the worst BBS poster ever. No match for you two.

Quicksmasher 2011-08-11 12:01:31

:'(

Sorry ;3

You're much cooler than Asandir. Declare War.

Wooooaaaarrrrr!!!!!!

Quicksmasher 2011-08-11 13:00:33

Why this face then at my preprevious comment =P

Quicksmasher 2011-08-12 09:01:10

I'm a Narwhal and both my comment and pm are as true.

Deal with it 8-)

Quicksmasher 2011-08-12 09:01:25

P.S.: I know you check pms before comments.

Asandir 2011-08-12 09:36:33

I think that I said my opinion on the newspost already in a pm, so I just want to add that I like the picture alot, and as I know now, it was even material for the userpage header of an user, awesome :D
As a sidenote, Quicksmasher banned me without reason from sending private messages to her, so I returned the favour by blocking her completely :'(

Quicksmasher 2011-08-12 10:11:16

I'm a flash author for other sites.

Quicksmasher 2011-08-12 10:17:12

Aka, well I don't want to lie, author helper.

I make premade games others can download as .swf or .fla to modify as they wish.

Or tutorials, or how to show people how to make compact programs with flash (drawing, animating, how to 3D, etc.)

Not cool really. I just know much stuff about those things, but I never actually use them to get money.

Flashforum ;3

Quicksmasher 2011-08-12 13:17:32

Because NG doesn't sponsor in that way.

It's like a wikipedia but with flash instead of articles - you upload, instantly everyone can see it but you don't get paid.

I don't need the fame, just the money. I could upload 2+ month old projects, but I don't feel like doing so on this account.

I uploaded them on my alt.

Quicksmasher 2011-08-13 08:56:23

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Addict 2011-08-15 12:17:01

Hello Gimmick.

You are cool.

Coreghost 2011-08-17 13:39:55

You now ain't allowed to be Gimmick anymore because Coreghost has said so.

Weed?

P.S.: shhhh