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This is a story I wrote for my english test (as a first language) in school, and I'm pleased to say I got a very pleasant score indeed, considering I was in the top (with another person in my class with the same mark).
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/* Task: Write a story or an episode of suspense in which a character is facing a problem relating to time running out. */
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Opening my eyes, I looked around my surroundings. There was a lot of sand around my ankles and I could have sworn everything was a lot fatter than it should have been; I even saw some light from a nearby light source shine in my direction, only to be scattered everywhere.

"Have you woken up yet, sleepy-eyes? Good." boomed a deep voice from nowhere in particular. "There is sand falling from the top compartment of your glass cabin; when it runs out, the sprinklers atop the shelf near the lid will start, pouring water on you. You won't be able to swim away because the sand will contract, sticking to anything it touches -- in this case, your feet -- when it comes in contact with the water, effectively anchoring you to the bottom of the very hourglass trap I use for people like you."

"Wh-what did I do?" I stammered, almost falling asleep every now and then.
"Oh, you know what you did, Mark, if that's your real name!" shouted the voice, obviously exhibiting an obvious tinge of angriness in its voice, and continued, "You were an assasin! Your famous method of killing all those innocent" -- now it sounded as if it was next to crying out loud -- "people was by drowning them, of course! I'd like you to have a taste of your own medicine!" sobered up the voice, now recovering.

"By the way, did I tell you that your timer had already started ten minutes ago? You had only 50 minutes, and you've blown 1/5th that time.", cackled the voice, now getting entertained by this -- which meant he could see me.

That last comment frightened me awake -- I knew I had to get out of this trap, and quickly; it seemed that I had two options at hand which I thought up of while the voice jabbered away: i) Try jumping, catching hold of the middle constriction and use that to my advantage and hop out, fighting the pressure of the falling sand; or the safer but more idiotic option ii) where I try to stick to the walls of the hourglass and climb out, spider-man style.

Since it was more than obvious I couldn't do the second option, I decided to think up of more ideas and wait for the majority of the sand to fall to the bottom compartment; I blew about half of my original time, just thinking (to no avail) when I decided it was safe enough to execute the first, last and only good enough plan.

The sand pile had grown considerably while I was thinking, and it was up to my stomach -- I pushed away as much sand as I could into a pile, and stepped on it, using it as an impromptu platform to aid me with the jumping. I made sure to squint, lest the sand enter my eyes and foil my plan, and rub my hands with sand, so they wouldn't slip when grabbing the glass.

I jumped and reached out for the constriction, which I failed. Trying again and again, I jumped as high as I could each time, and went on long after I was tired, my main source of energy being adrenaline from the fear of death, panicking more each second, as time ran out.

I knew I was too late.

//Teacher's comments: [Attach the following sentences to the end:] I was soon about to face my doom and in the same manner as ....
//Teacher's comments: Well done, (name)! Very imaginative -- unusual storyline! Content and structure: Band 1 - 11/13. Style: 11/12. Total: 22/25.
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To tell you guys the truth, I was mainly inspired by the good ol' guys at the BBS, what with their create your own Saw traps thread. That was the main source of inspiration -- maybe even the plot -- that I got. I'm so lucky to be on Newgrounds, else I'd have not got this.

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