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[Green Moon Lab]

Broken for me too

The preloader didn't work for me. It said "Play" but all that came was a blank screen, save the background. Please fix it and......I'd be safe not saying anything.
So i'm giving it an 8.

[Atop Chat]

"Doesn't work"

never got past the help page.

[Portal Defenders]

"Remove the music"

You could have removed the music also. It ballooned up the size to 8.5 mb. Heck, now I can't get to load this game and I can't get my medals. >:-(

[MagicPen2]

"I just don't know...."

The game is fun, it has a great concept, but it kind of gets boring later on. And there's something that annoys me: the music. Because of the music I'm forced to download this file instead. If the music was gone, then I would give it a 10.

[Missile Man 2]

"Wow you are so sooo cool man....."

It truly deserved this 5/5 and 10/10 from me! The intro was nice, holstering a man with a radio and a rocket, the game was nice, but I found a few glitches.... :(| When you double - clicked the mouse when the game was over, I saw my score was really 206, then it said, "your score: 206" then I clicked the mouse and it said for a second: "your score: 0" and went back to the game screen. I liked how you drew those birds and obstacles and stuff. Jeez, was it hard! Those GODDAMN birds and especially that STUPID jumping man! I felt as if I could make the missile move into him right then! Anyway, enough of that. Here are a few things to work on:

The smoke - If you try and try but the smoke disappears in a flash because of _alpha, then remove the smoke. It might also block the view of the person's cursor, but that's what it's supp-hosed to do, ha ha!

The man you control - If you try and just make the man move using the arrow keys using the if(Key.isDown(Key.RIGHT){ or if(Key.isDown(Key.LEFT){ then it might - no, not might, WILL get a higher rating - I guarantee.

Lolz that jumping man...............
Might be good enough for a platform game like the guy below me says.....if you just work on the parts I told you about.

If this advice helps you build the full version of this game, then don't forget to credit me! No, not the NG API, I hate that thing.
[Sanjeev98]
P.S PM me.

14StoryDesign responds:

Thanks Sanjeev! I am enjoying getting the feedback. I have been making small Flash things for years but most of it has stayed unseen.

I will work on getting the smoke working better. The response I get is that people like the smoke, it just slows down the flash interpreter. So I am going to try and reduce the frequency and then I can sustain it longer.

[ToWeR]

"A logical game"

I thought this game was quite well-done. I gave it a 10 because there was no violence I enjoyed the problem-solving aspects that required some creativity and logic. I thought the sound effects and graphics were good -- the images were clear, the scenes were simple but not overly plain. I enjoyed the humorous way a challenge was overcome. Well-done!
I like non-violent movies/games, 'cos there's no fun in violence - only sadness in it.

[Pixel Draw]

Well, it is nice but............

Well, it is a nice game, but so far as I am concerned, if you could add a submit button to submit your creation, it would be a bit better. But, please, do you know how to create a submit button? I'm doing one for my new flash game - Jetpack Man v1.0 - the demo, which, if passes judgement and everybody likes it, i will make the full 50-level game. So, how do you add a submit your score, or submit button?

NecroLordOfChaos responds:

I do not know how to make a submit button, sadly.
so if you ever learn how, please pm me and i'll add it to the game :D

Thank you for reviewing!

[Sandbox]

"Lovely game!!!" XD

I love this game for what it does ;))))). If you draw wall, here are some tips: You should use brush size 1 if you have got a slow processor. Plant: The same. Laugh Out Loud - When you set fire to the falling stream of oil, you know what happens ^_^ :). Here's one experiment: Draw a wall, brush size 5 - only if you have a fast CPU - and Plant wall, brush size 5 on top of it - be careful! - and gunpowder, sand, water etc. Then set fire to the mixture you created!!!! BuWuhHaHaHa!!!!!!!! Note: Don't put oil to the mix you got, because when I did that, the oil destroyed the walls of the - well - wall. I'll add this to my favorites. Wait - I think I forgot something - Great Job, Rens Rongen (WallArcher)! Do you know where you can download an executable of this game! I could play on and on and on, because it is such a lovely simulator. But here's where you went wrong - The Java version is ALSO slow - both are the same. Still, I am bamboozled by how you managed to create such a game in Flash. Is it in actionscript 1, actionscript 2, or actionscript 3?

I knew it! This game is simple and it has got 3.96/5.00! Simple is always the best! Always! This is a 10/10 and 5/5, my friend. If you just made the game faster for all CPU's then I might give it a 12/10 and 6/5 LOL. I'll definitely add it to my favorites and vote 5/5 every day, every day!!!
That's all from me, Rens Rongen. [WallArcher]

[Sanjeev98, student of 10 years and flash designer]

P.S I love this flash and you for making it!!!!

[That Dam Game]

"Adorable game XD ^_^ O_o !!!!!!"

Hahaha Wow! The only reason I kept playing this was because of the ADORABLE sounds the sheep made! Along with some of the other animals like the horse and cow. ^_^
I'm gonna add it to my favorites!!!!

Absolutely made my day!

[numeri]

"Wow" O_o

Kinda lovely. It was a nice game, but the problem with me is that i can't memorize numbers so easily. I forget them quickly; it will take more than this to let my memory be good. But it's nice. I might even be wrong. It might be changed and then everyone might vote this review as useless.
Good Job, Flash-Clips!